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Pressing on to Write the Next Book

Like almost every writer, I have a few unfinished manuscripts hidden away in my binders or on my desktop. Some show promise. Some are appalling and I really should delete them. But for some reason, I leave them there, hoping they might contain a germ of an idea that may still prove useful or inspiring.

Yesterday I picked up a binder from my bookshelf. After blowing off the layers of dust, I began to read it. One hour passed, and then another. I opened the Microsoft file that contained the rough outline and first few chapters. After reading the entire thing, 19,311 words, I made a decision—I would finish writing the book.

A Revived Manuscript

I started the manuscript in 2015, almost seven years ago! I have no idea why I stopped. What got in the way? A family crisis? A vacation or trip? Or was I preparing for a Christmas or Easter celebration? Whatever it was, it was intensive, and pulled me away for enough time to encourage me to put my project on the shelf and leave it there.

Well, forget about all that. I am moving on, picking up the pieces, propelling myself forward.

The first 16 chapters were published online. I received many comments and a great deal of support from my readers. Here is part of the outline:

Happenings; A Coming-of-Age Novel. (This is a temporary title.)

Synopsis: 

A young small-town girl works for the local paper and yearns to move to the city, which she has never seen. She finds life in her town stifling, and dreams of leaving, but there are many obstacles in the way. Her editor offers her a permanent job when she graduates, and her boyfriend wants to marry her. She realizes she has to make a decision to go or stay.

Eventually, she does go away to Edmonton, the city nearest to her town.

Outline:

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Norma is a young girl, living in Northern Alberta, in a small town. Her father owns a hardware store. She has an older brother, who is so perfect that he is an irritant to her.

Norma works for her board in town, so that she can go to school. Normas hates her life, finds the small-town stifling and depressing. To her, it appears that nothing happens in her town. There are no possibilities, no way to move forward.

She has done well in high school and wonders why she made such an effort to excel. She has few options; get married to a farmer or move to the nearest city and get a job as a receptionist or office clerk.

She hears how the woman she boards with gossips with her friends and how they show discrimination and small mindedness. It bothers her that they have no respect for hard working women like her mother.

She decides to leave and make her life elsewhere, where she hopes people would have different values. She cashes in her modest education fund and leaves for Edmonton, where she plans look for a job. She has one good friend, Doreen, who wants to go with her but can’t.

She takes a bus to Edmonton, stays at the YWCA, and easily finds a job waiting on tables.  Although she is managing quite well, she is very lonely and wants to go home. She quits her job and buys a ticket for home. But she finds she just can’t give up yet, so she stays.

She finds another job in a Hudson’s Bay Department Store and finds a new living arrangement with three other girls. Things look up. Yet she is restless. She goes to the personnel department at the store to ask for a transfer to Calgary.

Norma looks for some meaning, some key to understanding herself. She settles in Calgary in an apartment and has a more interesting life. She wants to go to university, meet new people.  She writes her friend Doreen about all this. She knows she wants to become something, not be like Doreen, who stayed home, married, and had children.

The job at Hudson’s Bay has limitations. There is no room for advancement, no promotions. She goes to the employment office of the Alberta and Southern Oil and Gas Company and is hired as a receptionist. She is uncomfortable there. She is expected to dress up, wear high heels and look sophisticated. She realizes there is a lot of sexism in this job.

She spends her time walking along the deer trails surrounding the city and thinking about her life.

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My thoughts

As a writer, I am aware that what I write might be autobiographical. After all, what do we have to draw on if not our own lives? It has been a refreshing experience for me to go back all these years to a time before I began to write, and rediscover what was in my mind. I am grateful that I saved so many of my first attempts at writing. Sometimes, as in this instance, it is worthwhile to delve deeper and revisit a piece.

It’s strange to be doing this, after taking a break of over three years since writing my first novel, The Romanian Girls. Although I love blogging, I have always had another book in the back of my mind. I feel with an outline completed and a few chapters under my belt, I am on my way.

Strangely I have no expectations about this book. I’ll simply open ‘Word’ each morning, and write as long as I can, then call it a day, and live my life. I think this approach is the best one to take. No hype, no angst—just write!

Look for more about this project as publish my blog each week. I will post updates to keep you in the loop. As usual, you, my readers, are ever in my mind. I hope you come back to read my next efforts. In time, they will hopefully become a book!

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14 thoughts on “Pressing on to Write the Next Book”

    1. Anneli, it’s great to hear from you! I’ve enjoyed writing the first few chapters. It’s a good start. Thank you!

    2. Thank you, Anneli. I have the momentum going, and won’t stop until I’ve completed a few more chapters. I’m enjoying it!

  1. like you I have an unfinished manuscript – a memoir, that I would like to finish for my children. I have started but at a lost on moving forward. Any suggestions? Marilyn

    1. Still the Lucky Few

      Hi Marilyn,
      Thank you for connecting! However, I don’t understand why your comment doesn’t show up on my today’s blog. I’ve asked my tecchi to help.
      Hope you are well!
      Diane

  2. Go girl go – only you know if you have the time and the desire to actually retrace your steps and set the wheels in motion. Yes, lots of phrases (idioms) there but just my way of saying it’s never too late 😊

    1. Still the Lucky Few

      Yes, Cathy, I do have the time and desire, so there is nothing holding me back! I agree, it’s never too late!

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